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Homework_082417

Thesis statement Although advocators claims that using mobile devices such as laptop computer and smartphone in the classroom increase studying ability, it should be banned in the classroom. This is because it distracts students from instructor; it takes opportunity to learn note-taking; and it encourage to feel alienation for some students who don’t have the devices. Topic sentence The first reasons that mobile devices should be banned in classroom is that they make students not focus on instructors. Second, the reasons that mobile devices should be banned in classroom is that they student would not learn effective way for note-taking any more if they continue to use mobile devices. Final reasons that the mobile devices should be banned in classroom is that most of them are expensive, thus they can make for some student who don’t have the devices feel alienation. Counter-argument It is true that there are diverse mobile devices to help stud...
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Homework_0814_Synthesis

A substantial number of people believe that all PEDs are dangerous, and should be banned from sports. However, contrary to this notion, some others suggest that the most important what is needed for sport player is to define drugs. In other words, it doesn’t make sense regulating all chemical materials. Mounk (2016) states, “The use of artificial painkillers is widespread among athletes, but because we all take an aspirin from time to time, we’re not afraid that its use violates the Olympic spirit” (para4). However, this doesn’t mean that using chemicals is always safe like taking aspirin. Still there is potential dangers, and people who oppose taking drugs contend that taking drugs ruins everyone. Namely, using drugs increases a chance of injury. Goodman (2012) states, “Bigger, faster, stronger contributes to injures, shorter careers and debilitating retirement” (para8).              This issue is still controversial,...
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Homework_080817 Most of the interviewees in “Expatriates in India” are from places with higher standard of lovong than India’s. Try to imagine their first encounters with life in a culture with a lower economoc standard. What might have been different for them? How might they have felt anout it? What moght be the value of experiencing a culture with a lower economic standard than your own? What might somene learn from this experience? Logic fallacy Contets Possibility Hasty generalization Assumed that interviewees from higher standard of living plaaces representative of all expatriates as a whole. The result could be limited in specific city or feild.   Fact that average wage in India is lower than other North America countries or some Europe countries. Once expatriates come to India, they can get disap...
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Homework 080417

Introduction : These day, a substantial number of people believe that culture between Korean and Chines is perfectly same. However, contrary to this notion, there are some different culture as well as obviously same. First Body Paragraph : First main idea of both Korean and Chines culture is about dining etiquette. Basically, similar utensils are used in both culture. Support / example : preparing table / need to set sppons or chopsticks for elder people? Support / example : way to eat / can lift dish? Support / example : express taste / can “This is little salty”?   Second Body Paragraph : Another similar culture of both countries is about classroom. Support / example : any pose to be polite? / twist legs or supporting jaw Support / example : can eat or drink? / coke or sandwich? Support / example : open mind for question? / can ask in middle of class?   Third Body Paragraph : The most different part of both ...
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